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[HamHamha]

Hi guys! So after reading so many other members stories I though i would try to make one of my own

note: i am writing free hand and have no plan for this story…

 

Meet the characters:

Jelly: main character. A brave but sometimes fearful female robo.

 

Bear: a calm and quiet  male robo, Jelly’s best friend.

 

Dublay: A small, malnourished male hybrid dwarf that was accidentally placed in the robo cage, and Avi’s best friend.

Avi: A tiny female syrian hamster that accidentally got placed in the robo cage, Dublay’s  best friend.

 

 

Lemon: A large robo hamster that hoards all of the food for herself at the pet store. 

Pebbles: a kind female robo, one of Jelly’s best friends.

I will try to have the first chapter out soon! 

Edited by HamHamha, 29 November 2021 - 12:06 AM.

[Hamustars]

I'm so excited for this! EEK!

[HamHamha]

Chapter 1:

“Finally, we’ll be out of this disgusting place!”  Bear whispered, referring to the gross rodent mill where the hamsters were born.

“I hope so!” I  replied.

“Maybe that’s where they took my mom.” Bear hopefully whispered.

“Your mother is dead, son”. An elderly hamster said as she walked by.

“NOW GIVE UP THE FOOD!” The old hamster yelled and attacked me.

“Hey, don’t attack my friend!” Bear exclaimed and wrestled the older hamster off me.

We both dropped the food and ran to the other side of our small cage, holding the one sunflower seed Bear had pouched. We split it and ate quickly for we knew our transport would be coming soon, and the other hamsters would want that food.

Suddenly a hand grabbed Bear and I by our small tails and lifted us up. We had heard the older hamsters calling them “humans”. The last words my mother left me with were “stay away from the humans”. I struggled around and tried to move, but i was trapped. A few moments later, the “human” put me down into a cage even smaller than the one I had lived in before. 
“Stay in there, you stinky little rodents, while I get the lid.” The human yelled.

Suddenly, I realized that there were at least 50 other hamsters around us, mostly young like Bear and I. I looked around for Bear, and finally found him.

Then, it became hard to breathe. We were trapped! There was no air circulation! If we stayed in here much longer, we would die! Did they not care about us? Had they left us to die here?!
 

Sprry to leave you guys on a cliff hanger, I hope you enjoyed the story! New chapter very soon!!

Edited by HamHamha, 27 November 2021 - 02:41 AM.

[ChloesCritters]

“Your mother is dead, son, NOW GIVE UP THE FOOD!”-the old hamster

[HamHamha]

Next chapter out very soon!!

[ChloesCritters]

Next chapter out very soon!!

yess

[HamHamha]

Chapter two is very short.

Chapter 2

They shoved more and more hamsters into the small plastic tub. Eventually, it was so full that walking was impossible! Finally, we were loaded bin upon bin upon bin into a truck and driven away to PetCo.

When we arrived, Bear and I were given a quick health check and put into the “robo” quarantine cage. We were put with six other “robo” hamsters. This included one Syrian and also a hybrid dwarf. Later I learned that these hamsters were Avi and Dublay, some of my good friends. But, upon arrival, I was too tired to notice anything, so I fell asleep next to Bear. 

14 days later

After we had finished our “quarantine” Bear and I were deemed healthy along with four other hamsters. The other two (later called Penny and Leo) were considered “weak” and “unhealthy” but that didn’t make sense to me because weren’t we all like them?

The “humans” put us into a larger tank that they call a display tank. I call it dying yet somehow being still alive.

Edited by HamHamha, 29 December 2021 - 01:11 AM.

[dustyham]

i love this!! i'm so excited to see whats gonna happen next 

[HamHamha]

i love this!! i'm so excited to see whats gonna happen next 

me too (as i said, writing free hand and don’t have a plan for this story)  !

 

Next chapter shall be out within the next 10 minutes!

Edited by HamHamha, 29 November 2021 - 12:09 AM.

[HamHamha]

Chapter 3

Bear, the Syrain hamster, the hybrid, and I were placed into a 20g with two other robos. There was an inch of rough Carefresh bedding, a small plastic hide, a bowl of gross Oxbow food, a tiny 4 inch wheel (how where we supposed to run on that?), and a water bottle. 

“Hey, maybe this won’t be so bad,” I whispered to Bear.

“I hope so” Bear responded quietly.

“Well, well, well, look who we have here. A couple of little runts, eh? What are your names and ages?” A large female robo squeaked from the side of the cage.

“Uh, I dont have a name” I said.

“Well, you didn’t answer the full question! HOW OLD ARE YOU?” The grumpy robo yelled at me.

“Two weeks old” I replied, because that is the age I thought of and felt. The grumpy robo nodded.

“And why are you two here?” The female robo asked, suddenly turning to the Syrian and hybrid.

“You’re both obviously not robos!” She continued.

“We know, but those stupid humans think we are.  

I am Avi and this is Dublay.” Avi added.

“And you little fella?” The robo asked, pointing at Bear.

“I-I-I’m—“

“Speak up kid!” The robo yelled.

“I’m Bear, 3 weeks old.” Bear replied, just a little louder.

“Lemon, stop asking questions and let them sleep!” A small, kind looking robo spoke up.

“Don’t let Lemon bother you. She can be a bit spicy at times. I’m Buttons, it is nice to meet you.” Buttons soothingly whispered.

 “Oh, thank you!” I replied. 

“We will have the girls sleep in this burrow, and Bear and Dublay can sleep in the hideout.” Pebbles continued. The ‘burrow’ she was speaking of was about 4 inches of bedding in a cave like shape, so hardly a burrow at all.

“But where will you sleep?” I asked.

“Oh, Lemon and I usually tip over the food bowl, eat the remaining food, prop it up with bedding and sleep in there. But don’t be too concerned, darling.” Pebbles answered.

I just nodded my head and slipped into the burrow next to Avi, who really wasn’t that much bigger than me.

 

I am sorry that this chapter didn’t get out sooner. It took so long to write!

Edited by HamHamha, 29 November 2021 - 01:25 AM.

[dustyham]

Chapter 3

Bear, the Syrain hamster, the hybrid, and I were placed into a 20g with two other robos. There was an inch of rough Carefresh bedding, a small plastic hide, a bowl of gross Oxbow food, a tiny 4 inch wheel (how where we supposed to run on that?), and a water bottle. 

“Hey, maybe this won’t be so bad,” I whispered to Bear.

“I hope so” Bear responded quietly.

“Well, well, well, look who we have here. A couple of little runts, eh? What are your names and ages?” A large female robo squeaked from the side of the cage.

“Uh, I dont have a name” I said.

“Well, you didn’t answer the full question! HOW OLD ARE YOU?” The grumpy robo yelled at me.

“Two weeks old” I replied, because that is the age I thought of and felt. The grumpy robo nodded.

“And why are you two here?” The female robo asked, suddenly turning to the Syrian and hybrid.

“You’re both obviously not robos!” She continued.

“We know, but those stupid humans think we are.  

I am Avi and this is Dublay.” Avi added.

“And you little fella?” The robo asked, pointing at Bear.

“I-I-I’m—“

“Speak up kid!” The robo yelled.

“I’m Bear, 3 weeks old.” Bear replied, just a little louder.

“Lemon, stop asking questions and let them sleep!” A small, kind looking robo spoke up.

“Don’t let Lemon bother you. She can be a bit spicy at times. I’m Buttons, it is nice to meet you.” Buttons soothingly whispered.

 “Oh, thank you!” I replied. 

“We will have the girls sleep in this burrow, and Bear and Dublay can sleep in the hideout.” Pebbles continued. The ‘burrow’ she was speaking of was about 4 inches of bedding in a cave like shape, so hardly a burrow at all.

“But where will you sleep?” I asked.

“Oh, Lemon and I usually tip over the food bowl, eat the remaining food, prop it up with bedding and sleep in there. But don’t be too concerned, darling.” Pebbles answered.

I just nodded my head and slipped into the burrow next to Avi, who really wasn’t that much bigger than me.

 

I am sorry that this chapter didn’t get out sooner. It took so long to write!

Ooh!! I love it! Buttons seems so nice 

[HamHamha]

Chapter 4

Bored! Bored! Bored! There was nothing to do in this tiny cage, except sit around and jump at the walls of the tank.  

Suddenly, a hand reached in and grabbed Lemon and me. It held us so tightly that we could not move. 

“Would you like these hamsters?” A pet store worker asked a young girl and her mom.

“Yes, but I think she was also looking at that small white colored one.” The girl’s mom said, pointing at Bear.

“Ok, so you would like these three?” The pet store worker asked.

“Yes” The mom and girl replied, at the same time.

“Alright, so I see you have a nice large cage, high quality food, and even a five inch wheel!” The pet store worker happily replied.

Large-?high quality-?five inches-? I thought. 

“Ugh, when will they ever learn?!” I asked Bear.

Just as Bear was about to speak, Lemon interrupted saying, “Probably never!”

The next day

“Ok, you guys have been home for a day! It’s time to play in your excercise balls! Look, I got one for each of you!!” The girl excitedly whispered.

“Natalie, I hope you aren’t touching those hamsters!” The girl-Natalie’s-Mom yelled from the kitchen.

“Well why can’t I put them in their exercise balls?!” Natalie replied.

“Um, sure honey, but not for more than 30 minutes!” Natalie’s mom yelled.

“Okay mom!” Natalie sweetly replied.

“C’mon guys! Let’s play!” Natalie whispered.

“Ugh, not those horrendous balls of torture I thought.

2 Hours Later

“Mom, they’re tamed. Now can I take them outside to the park?” Natalie asked.

“Sure honey! Be back in twenty minutes!” Natalie’s mom replied.

“Okay mom!” Natalie answered.

Oh no, I thought. To the park?! In the blazing hot July sun?With kids playing? In excercise balls?

At the park, there were two slides, a set of “monkey bars”, a tunnel, and a “sandbox”.

“Look Amy! Look Maddie! I have hamsters!!!” Natalie bragged to her friends.

“No fair! I want one!” Amy unhappily yelled.

“I’ve got one! But it doesn’t have a cool ball. I’m going to go get mine!” Maddie happily screeched.

“Ok, but be quick! I’ve gotta be back home by five!” Natalie yelled as Maddie ran out of the park.

Within five minutes, Maddie was back. She had an ugly, longhaired male Syrian hamster in her hands.

“I had to wake him up but he’s here!” Maddie proudly told her friends.

“Aw, he’s cute!” Amy said.

“Mine are cuter.” Natalie replied.

“No” Maddie said.

“Yes!” Natalie replied.

“Put them together! Let’s see!” Amy said.

Natalie took Bear, Lemon, and I out of our balls, right next to the Syrian hamster.

“Hi!” I squeaked, and moved myself so that I was between Bear and Lemon.

“This is my territory and nobody gets near me!” The Syrian yelled.

And that’s when the real fight began.

 

Hope you guys enjoy-and sorry to leave you on a cliff hanger.

[HamHamha]

Okay, so it has been a while….

Chapter 5

The Syrian hamster crept closer and closer to me. It must have been able to smell my fear. 

“You there!” The Sryian squeaked in my direction.

“Yes?” I asked.

“You we’re the closest to me! Now I shall kill you!”

Oh no, I thought. 

Then the Syrian grabbed for my neck. I bit his paw, but this enraged him. He once more grabbed for my neck, but this time he took hold of me. 

“No stop!” Maddie and Natalie yelled. They both grabbed us.

“You hurt my hamsters!!” Natalie screamed, before running out  of the park and back home with us.

“How was the park honey?” Natalie’s mom asked.

“MADDIE ALMOST KILLED MY HAMSTERS!!” Natalie yelled.

“Oh no, are they okay?” Natalie’s mom asked.

“Yea” Natalie replied.

“Good! Well put them back in their cage and let’s have dinner!” Natalie mom enthusiastically responded.

“Okay mom!” Natalie answered, and finally pt us back in our tiny cage, with a little bit more food.

The Next Day

After Natalie was done playing with us, she accidentally left the cage door open. 

“Bear look!” I whispered.

“Freedom!” Bear exclaimed.

We both scrambled over the open door. 
“Wow, that’s a long drop!” I stated.

 

 

Hope yo enjoyed and sry it was so short—I have to leave rn!
 

[HamHamha]

Wow, sry it’s been so long! I’ll try to post more chapters a little bit more regularly!!

Chapter 6

“Do we wanna jump or-?” But before Bear could finish his sentence, Natalie’s mom grabbed us and put us back in our cage. She shut the door of the cage firmly behind her.

“HA I see you didn’t get out of here so easily then!” Lemon said, and attacked me. 

She was biting near my neck! Ow, ow, ow!!!! Calm calm, I thought before passing out.

I lay there quietly on the floor of the cage, not moving hardly breathing, Bear would later tell me.

When I woke up, Lemon bit my neck again!! 

But before I could react, Natalie opened the cage and grabbed me.

Later that day, when Natalie wasn’t home, her mom picked us up and the rest of our bedding and food and brought us back to the pet store!

I panicked as soon as I was put in the “robo” quarantine cage.  

Leo and Penny were still barely living in the quarantine cage, and there were two other “robos”: a male hybrid like Dublay and and a male Syrian. I had never been around a male Syrian hamster, just Avi who was INSANE. 

14 days later

After our “quarantine” time was up, I was placed in the SAME tank as before, but this time Lemon wasn’t with us.THANK GOD!!

“Oh my gosh, you guys! It’s Jelly and Bear! They are back!!” Avi exclaimed, and hugged me.

“Hey!” I replied.

“What happened?” Dublay asked.

“Oh, we were at a home with this awful girl who took us outside in excercise balls and another hamster almost killed us!” Bear exclaimed.

“Oh, I’m so sorry!” Buttons said, rushing up to us.

“Well, why don’t you guys get some sleep? You seem so tired!” Buttons added.

We went to our designated spots, me with Avi and Bear with Dublay.  Pebbles slept alone that night.

In the morning, there was a surprise waiting for us. And NOT a good one!

 

Sry to leave you guys on a cliff hanger! Idk if anyone even reads this anymore but.. I hope you enjoyed!! I will have another chapter out soon (hopefully, bc I’m kinda busy today)!!

Edited by HamHamha, 29 December 2021 - 02:01 AM.

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I READ IT! Keep posting!!!