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[BobaTad~HH]

I am bored, so yeah lol.

 

I wanted this to be about a hamster, who is free by escaping their owners terrible life. Not the first chapter right now, but i will post more here in about... a day or two.

 

Chapter 1/2: Preview

 

"You will have the dentist cut your teeth, got it?" Said a little girl holding some nail clippers. She faced towards a small cage with a Roberoski dwarf Hamster in it. She sat down on her mini couch, watching a video titled: C-u-t-e-s-t H-a-m-s-t-e-r-s #-2. 

Someone held a small nail clipper tip, and began to cut all four front teeth. "I'll do it that way" She said out loud. She swang open the door, grabbed the poor hamster, and began to snip. The hamster began to squirm and make tiny squeaks. She put them down, with barely any teeth left. "There. Now, stop squirming when i cut your teeth!" 

The hamster known as Rose, tried her best to chew and swallow her pellets, and try to sleep. Her little paws clenched the base of the cage, trying her best to burrow, but it was useless. She slept uncovered, feeling unsafe. Its a whole lot better than being crowded at the old place... she thought in her head. 

The next night, she woke up to the girl grabbing a glass of water from her night stand. Rose hid in fear, ducking under her small amount of bedding. The girl went to bed, and Rose got out of her bedding. She went on her wheel, feeling her back in pain. She stopped, and began to bar chew. 

END

Inspired for the first part by lightning~'s story Lilly: A hamster story.

Don't worry, it'll get better. Follow for more chapters!

 

[Lightning~]

Hehe

I'm glad i was finally able to inspire someone 

[BobaTad~HH]

Ok, continuing from chapter 1/2, we are doing the other half.
Chapter The Other Half: Other Half Of The Preveiw.
Rose made a loud clatter when she swung back from pain in her teeth, making her teeth throb. The girl woke up, stomped to the cage and yelled. "Hey! Go to sleep!" Rose stumbled back in fear. But, she realized the girl had left the cage door wide open. Rose eyes were wide open,she jumped right out of the cage, landing on a pile of books and stuffed animals making a run for it.
Rose ran faster and faster. She ran across the bedrooms, the living room, the dining room, until... Rose forgot there was a puppy in the house. The dog began to yip when they saw the mysterious hamster shadow of Rose, and the girl woke up as well. "Be quiet, Henery!" She groaned as she yawned. She looked down to see the hamsters shadow. "EEK! It's a spider!" She grabbed a cup, and slowly walked down the hall. Meanwhile, Rose found the front door crack. She squeezed, and sqeazed, until the Dog smelled her. Rose's head popped out through the other side. Her heart had nearly melted. She looked at all the grass, the new fresh air, the tall city buildings, but everything was very blurry to hamster vision so it's a little bit more difficult to actually see that.
Rose popped her abdomen through, then her left back leg and... her whole body was free.

You'll have to wait until later today or tomorrow!

[~MidnightHammy~]

!!!!

It's awesome!

[BobaTad~HH]

Haha, i forgot to make another chapter... Welp, i am doing it now XD

 

Rose looked into the lights of cars and buildings, seeing all the possibility to burrow into the dirt, and many ways to be a normal hamster again. Suddenly, the dog barked from the other side of the door, waking up her parents. They walked to the door, with eyes squinted. The opend the door to see what it was, and they were shocked. They scooped up Rose as quickly as possible, but she had other plans. Rose jumped with a loud squeak. The girl ran with a cup down the hallway, making the parents distracted while Rose ran down the large three main steps. She ran faster, and faster. She found a rest spot, and ate what she had packed in her pouch. 

She felt more thirsty and panicked than ever. She slept with nightmares haunting her dreams.

She woke up to the sound of whispering. She got up and trailed the sound. She stopped in a trash can in a ally way. She stood on her little hind legs, and sniffed the air. The whispering had stopped. But, all at once, a giant, big, hungry, stray cat pops out of the garbage and continues to swipe at Rose! Rose squeaked for help, but nothing in return. Suddenly, she felt 6 paws on her back. She was pulled back, just before the cat took a hamster dinner to go. She turned around to see 10 Syrian hamsters. "She's awfully small for a hamster...'' One said with a golden coat. "Why does she have eyebrows like humans?" Another said with a Sable Banded coat. Rose panicked. She was scared of other hamsters. They grabbed her when she tried to speed off. ''There is still a cat outside, dummy!'' Rose was finally calmed down to ask, "Can i join your colony?"

Edited by BobaTad~, 14 October 2021 - 09:33 AM.

[HamHamha]

OMGGGGG

 

its so good!!!

[BobaTad~HH]

Hello everyone! I have been thinking... I don't know what my characters names and looks are going to be... so I thought maybe- you could have a chance to enter your own hamster!

Obviously, Rose is already taken.
We need:

7 Syrians
1 Roberoskis
1 Chinese
And 0 Campbell Dwarf. (Hybrid can be in here. All Campbell slots have been taken.)

In total, we have 9 slots.

Please enter:

Username:
Hamster Name:
Picture: (Please try to use Imgur. Imgbb doesn't work on mine)
Coat Pattern/Color:
Any other details: (Optional)

Thank you so much!

P.S, Tad will be in here too!

So far:
1 Campbell Dwarf slot is taken.
2 Syrian Hamster slot is taken.

1 Roberoski Dwarf Slot is taken.

Edited by Tad&BobaT~, 29 October 2021 - 07:24 AM.

[mlel~]

Hello everyone! I have been thinking... I don't know what my characters names and looks are going to be... so I thought maybe- you could have a chance to enter your own hamster!

Obviously, Rose is already taken.
We need:

9 Syrians
2 Roberoskis
1 Chinese
And 1 Campbell Dwarf. (Hybrid can be in here)

In total, we have 13 slots.

Please enter:

Username: Mlel
Hamster Name: Melon
Picture: (Please try to use Imgur. Imgbb doesn't work on mine)

Spoiler

I can't access imgur at the moment but I'll try to edit it to imgur later when I can

Coat Pattern/Color: I'm not entirely sure, I think it's the normal pattern
Any other details: (Optional) he was a Campbell dwarf (most likely hybrid) male hamster

Thank you so much!

P.S, Tad will be in here too!

Edited by Mlel~, 21 October 2021 - 11:03 AM.

[HamHamha]

Hello everyone! I have been thinking... I don't know what my characters names and looks are going to be... so I thought maybe- you could have a chance to enter your own hamster!

Obviously, Rose is already taken.
We need:

9 Syrians
2 Roberoskis
1 Chinese
And 1 Campbell Dwarf. (Hybrid can be in here)

In total, we have 13 slots.

Please enter:

Username:
Hamster Name:
Picture: (Please try to use Imgur. Imgbb doesn't work on mine)
Coat Pattern/Color:
Any other details: (Optional)

Thank you so much!

P.S, Tad will be in here too!

So far:
1 Campbell Dwarf slot is taken.

Username: HamHamHa

Hamster’s Name: Cola

Additional Information: Cola is a male long haired Syrian Hamster

And I think his coat pattern is normal..

https://imgur.com/ikmk2vq

 

Edited by HamHamha, 21 October 2021 - 10:42 PM.

[BobaTad~HH]

Please continue to add your hamsters!! Thanks for the hamsters so far(:

[ChloesCritters]

Hello everyone! I have been thinking... I don't know what my characters names and looks are going to be... so I thought maybe- you could have a chance to enter your own hamster!

Obviously, Rose is already taken.
We need:

9 Syrians
2 Roberoskis
1 Chinese
And 1 Campbell Dwarf. (Hybrid can be in here)

In total, we have 13 slots.

Please enter:

Username:
Hamster Name:
Picture: (Please try to use Imgur. Imgbb doesn't work on mine)
Coat Pattern/Color:
Any other details: (Optional)

Thank you so much!

P.S, Tad will be in here too!

So far:
1 Campbell Dwarf slot is taken.
1 Syrian Hamster slot is taken.

soo i need to ask my sis for a pic of her hybrid dwarf and pancake (she has their photos)

but currently available is

username:oreothehamsteristaken(call me chloe)

hamster name:oreo
hamster pic:(i can't make an imgur account so can someone put in in imgur?)
https://imgbb.com/tXd9v0w
coat pattern;colour: probably a dominant spot hamster;black and withe
any other details: oreo loves food, she is shy at first but when you warm up to her she will be an amazing friend ,as a female syrian hamster (or just her personality) she loves going on adventures.

[RedPanda]

  Can Sahara be in your story?

Username: RedPanda

Hamster’s Name: Sahara

Picture: Sahara is in my profile picture.

Additional Information: Sahara is a female roborovskii hamster 

She has a normal coat pattern, I think. 
Her personality is more reserved. She doesn’t really like people and will try to warn other hamsters about possible threats, whether real or imagined. Her favorite food is millet seeds. She doesn’t like it when people make fun of her white eyebrows. 
 

[BobaTad~HH]

Thank you all for your adorable hammies! We need more, so please add your hamster! November 11th is when i will stop taking in hamsters. If not enough is taken by then, i will make my own characters. Please enter!

[BobaTad~HH]

Haha, haven't posted here in a while. But, here yah go! Its a long one this time (:

CHAPTER 3

Spoiler

 

"Can I join your colony?''The Syrians stood in confusion. 

 "Move out of the ways, fella's!" Said a hamster in the back. It was a very, old Campbell hamster. "Well, well, well. What do we have here?"

Rose backed up, feeling her back fur frizz up. 

 "Well, don't be shy, by all means! My names Melon. I once had a ol' owner. I can tell you had one!" Rose was shocked. How did he know? "I see you want to join the colony. To do so, you need to pass a little test. We'll let you stay for the night." Melon straitened his back, and orders his Syrians to go into the colony. Rose rushed inside. Suddenly, from the side, was party lights, loud music, and lots of hamster chit-chats. Rose opened the curtain inside, and it was almost like a party. 

 "This is part of out lounge. The party side. Lets go to the eating side." Rose's mouth gaped open at the disco ball hanging form the trash can ceiling, the dancing hamsters, the rock-band the Instaham-ster's, and the bright lights. She entered a royal red curtain, and went to sit at a table. This part was very quite, with violinist and pianist, dishes being served by mice, and couples laughing together. 

 "The name's Cola, the Syrian hamster." He brushed his beige fur back. "Your the first Roberoski in a while. Chinese hamsters are more rare, in fact. We haven't come across one in 50 years." Rose tucked in her neck. 

 "I swear to god, if this is a date-" 

 "Oh, goodness no! I am here to interview you. Resume and such." He chuckled. Rose glared at him. "Ahem, where was I? Ah yes, what is your name, thorns?" 

 "Thorns?'' She Coughed. 

 "You short temped, and your name is Rose, yes? Roses have thorns." Rose winded her eyes, and sighed.

 "My name is Rose Chamomile. I have zero experience in work, but I do have experience biting humans hands hard! And, um, I am 5 months old."  Rose handed him a tiny picture of her. "You can use that for the Resume."

 "That's all I need!" Cola got up, and walked away. 

 "COLA!" Someone yelled outside the curtain. "You are late to coming home!!'' Cola jerked, seeing a Female Black and white speckelld SyrianHamster.

 "Oreo! I was interviewing Thorns, my love!"

 "My names Rose!" She Exclaimed. 

After that, Rose began her training....

 

Sorry, its a pretty short chapter. I am worn out...

Thanks for reading (:

 

 

Edited by Tad&BobaT~, 18 November 2021 - 11:35 AM.