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Posted 30 April 2021 - 10:10 PM

1: birthday

"I'm so happy!" I sing as we pull up to the pet store parking lot. I've been begging for this moment for months. I'm shaking, something I do when I'm exited. I hop out of the car as fast as I can and run to the front doors. "Calm down." says my brother. "I'm trying!" I yell back, "Now hurry up!" They were walking slow, too slow, what if someone was in there buying the bird? Mom had said she phoned the place and they said they had a parakeet there for a month. I felt bad for it. they finally catch up. I rush through the doors.
 
    the odor of pets fill my lungs. its a small place, a lot of tanks filled with fish on the back wall, and next to that 10 gallon tanks with the mice, hamsters, rats, hedgehogs, and guinea pigs. There was a small room, which was the place the reptiles and insects were kept. In front of that room were what we came here for... the birds.
"Hello!" exclaimed a man behind the checkout counter. he was tall and skinny, short dirty blond hair, he looked around 21. "Hi." I said back, smiling. I had seen him before, I had came here a year ago to get my hamsters, he was the man that said that a hamsters man parts was tumor. I walked over to the birds. I looked up at mom. "Were is the parakeet?" The cages were labeled bumble bee conure and parrotlet. I had never heard of a bumble bee conure, but I knew that parrotlets were the birds my uncle owns. The tall man walked over and pointed to the corner of the reptile room. "He is in there." He opened the door to the room and walked over to the corner. it was sitting on a wood perch in a 'cage' (that was really just hardware wire nailed to the wall) "he" was obviously a she. "were are her friends?" I ask. "oh, a man came in and took four out of the five." he answered, opening the door to the cage, the bird flew rapidly across the cage and landed on the floor. the tall man reached for her, she flew and landed on the side of the 'cage' "Do you wanna try?" He asks. I nod. I go very slowly to the 'cage' reach my hand in. I get two inches away from her before she flies away. "Can I look at the other ones?" I ask. "Yep," he responds. We walk out. The man opens the cage to the parrotlets and gestures me to try. I reach my hand into the cage. They both bite. Really hard. I put my hand back out of the cage. Mom's try. They bite but she doesn't pull back. "No, no bite. Come on, step up, be a good birdie, be a good baby, step up." They bite more and she pulls her hand out of the cage. I whisper to mom "can we go back to Petco?" We had been there an hour before and they had many parakeets. I try to say it quiet so the tall man does not hear. "Do you want me to go?" No one answer but he still walks away. "Can we go back to Petco" I say louder. mom shakes her head and says "No, no, no , honey, were not driving back and fourth. We can wait a few days, or just not get a bird" I make a grumpy face at her.

 

  "Come on, lets go." I say walking towards the exit. "I've changed my mind."


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Posted 03 May 2021 - 12:00 AM

chapter 2 coming friday (hopefully)



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Posted 04 May 2021 - 11:33 AM

Cool, I like it so far keep it up

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Posted 07 May 2021 - 12:32 AM

chapter two! Turdo is a Robo dwarf hamster, he was abenend by his three owners, a mother, father and a child. He now lives in a dumpster, trying to find food and water, trying to survive. He is lucky enough to have survived a week by just eating banana peels and apple cores, and if he was lucky, some peanuts. He has found his way out of the dumpster today. enjoy!

 

CHAPTER TWO: THE MCDONALDS RESTRANT (Turbos POV)
 

I need to find water. I haven’t had water after the bottle my cage ran out of water, a few days ago. I spot a puddle, the water looks dirty but I will take whatever I can. I walk over to it. I drink it. It tastes funny, but it's better than the stuff in the big thing with all the old food. I wish I could pouch water. I should not have jumped off of the big dumpster. My leg hurts now, a lot. 

     I smell something, I thought I smelled it when I was in the big dumpster, but it was mostly blocked out by the smell of left over old beer and rotten fruits. Food. I follow the smell, limping. Big scary moving things go by me fast.

    The smell leads me to a gigantic square thing with another square thing one it with squiggles on it. Things are going in and out of it. A door is going back and forth when they put their hands on it. It's scary. But I will do anything for food.

I stay by the wall. I go in when a human pushes the door open, they look like my old humans. I stay by the wall. the smell gets stronger. another door. I go in fast. loud clanging noises and yelling from humans surround me.

 

 

"RAT!!' A human screams. More humans scream. one picks up a broom and runs towards me. "NO, I'm not a rat!" I yell. the human does not care. I run under the cooking table, terrified. The broom keeps attacking me. One human screams something I can't hear. The broom stops attacking me. I see human feet, then hands, then knees, then a head. "Hello, little guy." The human says softly. I can't see a head anymore, but I hear the human say "Idiots, it's a hamster not a rat!" I see only feet now, then the hands, knees and head. "Hi, would you like some lettuce?" Says the same human, lettuce in her hand. Lettuce did sound good. I walk towards the humans hand. I crawl into her hand, still scared. clean food tasted so, so good. the human grabbed me in a soft, worm, cozy towel. she pinched the back of my neck. Cradling me in one hand, me still eating lettuce, she grabbed a small dish from a cabinet and filled it with water. Set it down on the counter, and PUT me down next to it. I drink it fast. Clean, fresh, water. "You were thirsty!" says the human. 'Heck yah I was!' I thought. Lhe human lets me keep drinking and wraps me back up in the cozy towel. she cradles me and walk out of the doors. A bigger human is waiting at the door. "Ally, I..."


Edited by unicornblast5000, 07 May 2021 - 12:46 AM.

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Posted 07 May 2021 - 01:15 AM

Please keep writing, if you want to of course;)
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Posted 07 May 2021 - 10:11 PM

This sounds great! :D
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Posted 17 May 2021 - 10:58 PM

im sorry but i dont think i will post for a while, after Lightning died i dont really feel like doing anything. im sorry



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Posted 25 May 2021 - 08:32 PM

Two chapters coming today!, sorry for the delay!

Chapter 3:

Ugly

Jessica's POV

Hamsters are gross, stinky, ugly things. They look like balls of fur, I don't get why people like that. Ally texted me this morning saying she found a hamster in Mcdonald's and her mom let her keep it, even though she had rabbits already. Her mom alows anything, she could drop out of school if she wanted, but Ally is a nerd. I guess I DO have fish (that I love), but that's nearly a rabbit.

 

I'm Jessica, you sorta already now me, so I guess you don't need an intordution. my room is the cleanest room in the house, my father is a horder, mom left him a few years ago and took me and my 3 siblings with her. But she loved him and has not gotten over it, she is becoming into a horder herself. I am moving out of this dump-of-a-house as soon as a can.

 

my fish is Cotton Candy, a Giant Plaka Betta fish. he lives in a 10 gallon tank with plants. I love him so much. He knows every trick you can teach a betta fish. i try to keep him a secret from my friends, if they know about him, they'll ditch me. Ally's friends, on the other hand, are the kindest people in the world, they love Cotton Candy. Same with Ally. I hate it when me and my friends sit in the corner gossiping about them. But the though of them throwing dirt at me is worse. I have to stand up to them soon.


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Posted 25 May 2021 - 09:00 PM

chapter 4:

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Ally's POV

Ally, 5:26 PM: JESS!! i found a hamster in mcdonalds!

 

Jessica, 5:28 PM: really?

 

Ally, 5:28 PM: YESSSSSS!!

 

Jessica, 5:31 PM: what happend, did you keep it?

 

Ally, 5:35 PM: yessssss! i kept it, his name is turbo! because hes a robo, so hes so fast! 

 

Jessica, 5:42 PM: cuuutteee!!! bring him over somtime! you can play w cotton candy and i can play with turbo (:

 

Ally, 5:47 PM: ok!!! yay! in a few weeks, hes gotta go to the vet and become tame (:

 

Jessica, 6:02 PM: fun! send a pic of turbo:)

 

Ally, 6:04 PM: kk

 

Ally, 6:06 PM: https://ibb.co/pdBHGKc

 

Jessica, 6:09 PM: aww, what a cutie!

 

Ally, 6:12 PM: (: yeh, but he smells like a dumpster, i found a critter trail in a nearby dumpster, so mabye he was ditched

 

Jessica, 6:15 PM: sad ): im glad some one like you found him, not a 4 year old.

 

Ally, 6:20 PM: ty (:

 

Jessica, 6:22 PM: no problem lol, gtg, good night (:

 

Ally, 6:24 PM: lol, good night!

   

 

 I spent the rest of the night buying things for Turbo on Amazon and Etsy, and building him a cage. He is very tame.



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Posted 05 June 2021 - 12:22 AM

should i keep writing?



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Posted 07 June 2021 - 09:22 PM

should i keep writing?

Yes! Only if you want to, of course. I like where it's going!


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Posted 07 June 2021 - 09:41 PM

Yes! Only if you want to, of course. I like where it's going!

really? 5 ppl followed, 2 unfollowed, and you were the only one that replied...

it'll never be as good as other stories on the forum.



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Posted 07 June 2021 - 10:03 PM

really? 5 ppl followed, 2 unfollowed, and you were the only one that replied...

it'll never be as good as other stories on the forum.

Don't say that! You've only posted, what, four chapters? On my first story, when I'd posted that many times, I had barely any followers either. And just because it's not an instant hit doesn't mean no one likes it, it's just not everyone follows topics they read, because it buries other notifications on more urgent topics.


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