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Posted 15 August 2020 - 12:43 AM

A Hamsters Journey
 
This is a community story. The place to sign up to write a chapter can be found here. This thread is for the story itself.
Every week someone writes a chapter, so we don't know where the story will go!
 
PLEASE, WHEN QUOTING SOMEONE'S CHAPTER REMOVE ALL/MOST OF THE TEXT, OR PUT IT IN A SPOILER.
 

Since there are quite a few people following this thread, I just wanted to remind everyone that WE NEED MORE WRITERS. This story will go NO WHERE if people stop writing.

ANYONE can sign up multiple times, as long that its not in a row.

At this point, the next chapters are mainly lilhams~uwu and me writing. Please, if anyone wants to sign up, do it. You can even take one of my weeks.

 

If for any reason you'll need more than a week to write, or have some other special circumstance, please PM me asap. 

 

And if you do decide to write a chapter, please sign up here- Group Story Sign Up

 

Thank you!  ;D

 
This story is from the point of view of a nameless Pure Winter White hamster. She had a concussion and doesn't remember anything about her life in the wild. Will her memory ever return? Will she ever get a home? Will she return to the wild? Will she ever learn to trust humans again?[/size]
 
NOTE: Do NOT keep different gender or species hamsters together in real life. They WILL breed and/or fight. This story is 100,000% fictional.
 
 
The story so far...

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Posted 16 August 2020 - 01:37 PM

this is such a good story! I can’t wait to read the next chapter :)



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Posted 18 August 2020 - 09:22 PM

 

Chapter 2 Comes next week, and will be by IsAnyoneThere.

 

The accident hadn’t been a major one – just a small bump that had left a dent and shook up the passengers, but the medics were taking everyone in to the hospital to check them over. A man and a kid in one car, an old guy in the SUV. Maybe some aches tomorrow but they’d be fine. All in all, not a bad day, considering some of the incidents they’d been called to.

 

Officers Ramon Bradley and Jo DeWalt had been left at the scene. There wasn’t much to do; the guy in the SUV had admitted fault so there wasn’t any evidence to collect, it wasn’t a crime scene, they just didn’t want anyone coming in and stealing anything from the two cars or messing with anything until the insurance guys arrived to take photos. Patrolling around the two empty cars, Officer Bradley noticed a small plastic container on the back seat, with holes around the lid.

 

 

“Hey, DeWalt? I think we have another passenger in here!”

 

DeWalt ran over from where she’d been kicking aimlessly at some debris along the roadside, looking concerned, “WHAT? Shall I call the ambulance back?”

 

“Relax,” Bradley chuckled, pointing at the small pet carrier, “It’s probably the kids pet mouse or something. We should get them out of the car though, it’s getting hot. Kid’s gonna be upset enough today, don’t wanna tell her that her mouse died too.”

 

The two officers opened up the car door and picked up the carrier.

 

 

“Oh, heyyy! Look at this cute little guy!” Bradley exclaimed, opening the lid and peering inside. DeWalt, looking over his shoulder commented,

 

“I don’t think that’s a mouse. I think my niece had one like this, it’s a hamster. Mice have longer tails.” She sighed, “Poor thing’s probably scared, we should take it back to the station. Oh, hey, actually, I think we have a cage lying around in the evidence locker back at the station from that hoarding case months ago…? Nobody’ll notice if we borrow that for a while. Plus it'll be nice to have a station mascot again!”

 

"Ha, yeah, do you remember Squid? Best goldfish ever, he lives on in our hearts!", Bradley grinned and thumped his chest in a salute.

 

As the police officers gently moved the carrier to their patrol car, another large SUV arrived, carrying two self-important-looking people in suits. They exited the car and announced themselves as the officials for Alliance Mutual Pacific Sentry Insurance, who would be taking care of the scene. With a mutual eyeroll, Bradley and DeWalt radioed in to say they were heading back to the station. Just as they were leaving they heard a shout from one of the suited insurance people,

“Hey! Wait! There’s a pet carrier in here!  ……… it’s empty…”

 

DeWalt looked at Bradley and shrugged. “Maybe they had a spare carrier with them? Let’s head back.”

 

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I opened my eyes slowly and looked around. There was a buzz of noise around me, and I was surrounded by unfamiliar smells.

 

I sniffed the bedding I’d been placed on, it smelled like…. another creature? It didn’t smell like anything I was used to, but it didn’t smell threatening.

 

Looking around as far as I could see, I was in a cage that was larger than I’d been used to, but was clearly a bit musty and battered.

 

Beyond the bars I could see the blurs of figures moving around. One of them came up to the bars and spoke softly, pushing a piece of … was that carrot??... through the bars for me. I recognised the voice as the dark-skinned man who’d peered into my small carrier earlier. I seemed to be getting quite a lot of attention, though I just wanted to sleep. Many people came up to the cage, poking their fingers in and slipping small treats and bits of their dinner.

 

Luckily, they had provided a small hide for me, so I took my bit of carrot and retreated into there. 

 

Is this my new home? It's a bit loud, but the people seem nice. I have food, and a wheel, and treats... and I get the place to myself too!

 

...I wonder where Mulch is?


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Posted 19 August 2020 - 01:08 AM

 

 

I have to write Chapter 3, I don't know where I will start! I'll just have to say that this is remarkable! I'll have a tough time trying to write as much as a wonderful story as this!!  :starry-eyed: :thumbsup:  :valentine:



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Posted 19 August 2020 - 01:21 AM

I have to write Chapter 3, I don't know where I will start! I'll just have to say that this is remarkable! I'll have a tough time trying to write as much as a wonderful story as this!!  :starry-eyed: :thumbsup:  :valentine:

 

Haha, plot-twist! I thought I'd give you some options rather than railroad you into a story hehehe... you can go explore Mulch's fate, or Dots in the police station, or the kid who bought them.... up to you :D


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Posted 24 August 2020 - 07:05 AM

Chapter 3

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Me and my Dad finally reached the police station. I felt my heart being a bit more lighter. Yesterday was going to be the best day of my life, but it turned into a sort of ‘meh’ day. After going to the pet store to get a hamster, getting into a mild car incident, and going to the hospital, I’d say it was a busy day. I can’t say it was well-spent though. At least now I was finally getting my hamsters back, right?

 

It was a stupid decision to leave them back. I may have had no time to retrieve the plastic carriers nor could I even find it, but I could at least tried to, y’know?

But here we are, unlocking the car doors to get out, and opening the door to the waiting room. There, an officer awaited us with a carrier. My heart was bursting out of my chest. Finally. 

Except… where was the other hamster? I looked around to see whether or not there was another enclosure. Maybe they just had them in another room, that’s all. 

 

“It was good while it lasted,” the female cop, with a tag that said ‘Officer Romans’ said, handing me the plastic cage.

“We named it, ‘Officer Hams.' They were a great pleasure to have in the office. Of course, it wasn’t ours to keep. Perhaps we shouldn’t have gotten too attached to them.” She laughed. 

 

I held onto the carrier, watching as a small dwarf emerged from the small plastic hideout. As much as I should have been happy, I wasn’t. Unfortunately, I’m stubborn and wouldn’t settle down until I knew everything was okay.

 

“Um… thank you.” I still glanced around. “What did you name the other hybrid?

She looked confused. “What other hamster? Our team didn’t find anything else.”

 

My eyes widened. “A-Are you sure? There had to be something, right?” I blurted out.

 

“What do you mean, darling?” She asked me. 

 

“I went to my local pet store to get a hamster after months of research,” I explained. 

“There were two hybrids housed together and I decided to take them.” I swallowed. “They were in my hands before their car bumped into ours.”

 

She nodded. I definitely expected her to look at least slightly surprised, but I saw none.

“Is that why there was an empty carrier the insurance team found? Our officers thought it was simply a spare.”

 

My heart immediately froze. “Wait a minute…” I tuck a loose strand of hair behind my hair with shaking fingers. “What happened with the missing dwarf? Are they dead?”

I stared at her with huge eyes. I gulped. “What if we left the poor guy there?” I had many, many more questions but there was one I didn’t mention: ‘Was it my fault?’

 

Could I have done something? Perhaps I should have held on to them harder. How did one of them get out? Did the opening pop open? I should have listened to those Amazon reviews!

 

I felt helpless. Actually, not just helpless. It was a whole bowl of emotions. And not positive ones. 

I felt confused. I felt angry. I felt sad. I felt ashamed. I felt disappointed. I felt desperate. I felt guilty.

 

Confused because I didn’t understand how they could have escaped.

Angry because even though I had paid all of the money to get them, I only had one. Angry because it was that old guy who made this happen. 

 

Disappointed in myself because I could have done more.

Ashamed and guilty because it was my fault, wasn’t it? It was my hamsters. My pets.

 

I had full responsibility for them and I had failed them as their owner.

 

I think Dad could hear my thoughts or something. Maybe it’s just in the genes. But whatever it was, he put his hand on my shoulder and looked at me with gentle eyes.

I glanced back at him for a split second, then laid my eyes back onto the floor.

“It’s going to be okay,” he said softly. “At least you have one. You didn’t lose both of them.”

 

I guess that's true. But that still didn’t make me feel better.

 “I was in charge of them,” I bitterly replied. “I was supposed to be their owner. Their caretaker. I did the opposite of what I was supposed to do. I killed them.”

 

“April Lilith Trimian!” He raised his voice, but he didn’t shout. In fact, he never really shouted. It was only a slightly louder version than your normal tone. “You did not kill them. It is not your fault that this happened.”

 

“Uh… guys?” The officer nervously said. Oh right. I forgot she was still there. That wasn’t important right now though.

 

He didn’t understand! “Dad, it may not be all of my fault but I still took part of this. I did this too.” I grabbed the cage from the cop. It shook the cage which woke up the dwarf. I reminded myself to apologize to them when we got home. It’s probably not the funnest to be awakened like that. “Let’s just go home,” I sighed. “This conversation is going nowhere.”

 

“Fine.” My dad muttered. “Only because we’re in public.” He grabbed his keys out of his pockets, opened the door, and started to walk towards the car.  I followed. “But when we get home, you’re going to have a talking to!” Knowing my father, he usually grounded me if he said that. Oh well.

 

I ignored further conversation and stared at the gray hybrid dwarf. They watched me with beady, black eyes, and I couldn’t help but wonder what it would be like to hug their soft, fluffy fur. 

“I won’t let you down,” I whispered. He peered at me behind the battered bars. “I will not fail you.” I paused, searching for the right word.

 

“Butterbean.” I nodded, then watched the little dwarf chew on a piece of carrot. Probably from one of the cops. “Your name is Butterbean.”

 

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...Where am I? I tried to shift over to the left side of my body, but the pain was unbearable. If this was some joke, I thought, I was surely going to curse Dots for the rest of my life! Where am I? The question kept repeating in my head. I opened my eyes to see a road. Well, a sideways road. 

 

I was lying on the ground half-dead, so everything was sideways now. Gosh darn it, being old sucks. I remember when I was a little ol’ youngling who could jump all the way across the whole world. Those were the best times. 

 

Now here I am, an eleven month old dwarf stuck on this stone-cold pavement. My eyes drooped and my head went dizzy as I tried my best to stand up. I ignored the gnawing pain from my side and glanced over the surrounding environment. There was a blue clear sky, with no clouds whatsoever. And I saw a forest in the distance, about a few feet away. It looked inviting, but who knows? Maybe there’s a bird waiting to chuck off my head.

 

 I also had to ignore the constant questions from my head that kept annoying me like an annoying little dwarf who never spoke up and constantly liked to daydream about who-knows-what?

 

Wait. Dots. I can already hear her always commenting, “my name isn’t Dots.” Or that, “I don’t have a name yet!” It drove me nuts. How could she not see it? We were going to be stuck here for eternity, I was, so I never really bothered to ever think we were going to have a forever home.

 

But then that girl. Oh, I remember now. My memory ain’t as good as it was when I was a kid. She had blue eyes. Brown hair. Looks pretty young, but knew her stuff, unlike that lunatic. What is a “DJ Blueberry Sunfire Dwarf?” I’m certainly not a DJ. And just because I have the shape of a blueberry doesn’t mean I am one! 

 

Then, that maniac put us in that plastic carrier. It was okay, but I was way more excited for that ‘large cage’ she was promising to us! Good on her, good on her. Except the plastic carrier opening had popped open. And then I got thrown out of a nearby window of the car! I gotta say, I bet other hamsters my age wouldn’t survive that. In fact, I bet Dots wouldn’t survive that! Whether or not she’s supposed to be this ‘wild hamster.’ 

 

But now that I know what happened and my environment… what next? I didn’t know where I was. And Dots was who-knows-where? She was gone and there was nothing to do about it. Although I was feeling her absence, I quickly dismissed it. I saw something shimmer in the corner of my eye. I looked over to see the stinging sun, how stupid of me. 

 

Then again, I’ve really never seen the sun, so who could really blame me? But you know what I saw? I saw the sun setting down, which meant that night was coming. That was good, at least. No more sun, right? But, I decided, at the moment, that I had to do something, just one little thing before the sun set. And so, again, I stared back at the forest. The inviting forest. With leaves and trees and dirt. Nothing I’ve ever, ever seen before. Never smelled. Never touched, felt. Nothing. 

 

Of course, I could stay here on the ground, waiting for a car to smoosh me and make me roadkill. Or I could go walk to the forest, where I might wait for a snake to eat me and make me also get killed. Usually older animals don’t like to seek something new. Barely any animal would go to see anything outside of their enclosures if there’s a chance of no food or water. 

 

Except I was eleven months old and not exactly an elder. I was an older adult though. 

And that my enclosure was gone. I was probably nowhere near the pet store. If I was, then I probably didn’t have the strength to walk all the way there.

 

I was alone. And so, I padded over to the forest. I wasn’t strong enough to resist how inviting it was. It must be better than this rough roadway, right? A few regrets and thoughts filled my mind, but I focused on walking into the forest. What would await me, I thought. Birds? Tigers? Other hamsters? Dogs? Maybe even foxes?

 

Who knows. I walked inside, feeling the dirt under my paws. The only thing I know right now is that this strange little forest is home sweet home now.

 

Chapter 4 will be done by Hamsterlover47!! ;D


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Edited by Hamsterlover47, 25 August 2020 - 01:40 AM.


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Posted 25 August 2020 - 01:26 AM

This was a really good chapter! I loved all the character development. I just want to add that I believe I am signed up for the next chapter.

Could you please remove the chapter from the quote? Its very long to scroll through :)

 

Also, I checked the schedule and your next week :yes:

 

 

Chapter 4 will be done by Hammies Nuggets!! ;D

 

Chapter 4 is actually by hamsterlover47 :D



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Posted 25 August 2020 - 01:43 AM

Could you please remove the chapter from the quote? Its very long to scroll through :)

 

Also, I checked the schedule and your next week :yes:

 

 

 

Thank you. Sorry about that quote, I fixed it :)


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Posted 25 August 2020 - 01:55 AM

Chapter 4 is actually by hamsterlover47 :D

 

Gah, thanks for telling me! I'm not completely sure how I switched Chapter 9 and Chapter 4 in my head. :duh:



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Posted 25 August 2020 - 02:06 AM

 

 

Thank you Hamsterlover47! I read your post in lil BIG dwarf's quote, lol. I appreciate it, and I'm excited to see how you do Chapter 4. ;D



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Posted 31 August 2020 - 04:04 AM

Chapter 4

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My Eyes slowly opened as my cage shook around me. Now that my eyes were open, the throbbing returned to my feet. I hate those stupid mesh wheels! I turn to begin slowly licking my bleeding paws. Then I freeze. No, not now. The cold air rushes into my hide, my cage rattling with each stomp the humans made. “Please don’t take me back to the monster” I squeaked. Where was mulch? Where were the nice people that gave me carrots? Must get away! I tried to dig, but as always, the plastic stops me. I also hate that plastic! 

     “I won’t let you down.” A sweet, soft voice enters my ear. I relax a bit, somehow. I close my eyes, remembering what mother said to me so long ago. “If you are scared, close your eyes, curl up, and get those teeth ready for biting!” I have never bitten anyone, but I try to keep my teeth in the best care, just in case. We finally reach the monster, I have begun shivering from the cold. I want all this to be a dream. I want to go back to the pet shop. I want to be back with mulch. I want my paws to stop that awful throbbing. I even want my Oxbow! I curl up even tighter, wishing to fall asleep. Maybe, when I wake up, this awful dream will be over. 



For the Second time this morning, I am woken up by a rattling around my cage. I look around, almost devastated to see that I am still here, in this tiny wire cage, the vibrating monster shaking my tiny body. 

“Look Butterbean, we’re home!” the soft, sweet voice speaks again. Home? No, I am not home. I am in a too small cage with a mesh wheel and stale food! I start squeaking to let my discomfort be known. 

       “Look Dad! She’s squeaking!”

Thankfully, my squeaking must have worked because the monster stopped rumbling and moving everywhere. My little cage is bouncing up and down as the girl nearly stomps up to large building 

  “I have got a hamster! I have got a sweet little hammmmmmmster!” The girl finished her song with a twirl, sending me across the other side of the cage. 

   “Oops, sorry Butterbean.” The twirling stopped. The girl had entered the building and had walked into a pretty place, with soft pink walls and a blue rug. And what is that big thing in the corner? A tank? I knew about tanks, I had seen them in the pet store. They always had those weird shiny swimming things in them. It looked big, and I saw a plastic wheel! Slowly, the girl opened the top of the tank and then opened the top of my way-to-small cage. I saw a hand enter from the top, coming right for me. The last time this happened, I was taken from my home and put in a box riding in a monster machine! I can’t let this happen again! The hand came down and wrapped it's small fingers around my body. “No!” I squeaked. And then for the first time in my life I bit someone. I latched on and bit deep. No one will touch me! I hung on for a few seconds, but then my teeth began to ache, and I pulled off. The taste of blood ran through my mouth. It tasted worse than oxbow!

       “Ow, Butterbean! That really really hurt.” The sweet voice rang again. But this time, it had another ring to it? Pain? And before I could react, the hand reached in again and lifted me up, high in the air! After what felt like hours the hand set me down on bedding. And it was soft! Not like that itchy pine stuff at the pet store. I ran off the hand, quick to get away. That mean hand! It deserved to be bit. However, in an instant, my anger melted away as I looked around the weird glass thing. It was awesome! That’s an 8 inch wheel! Look at that big hide! And, is that a… it is! A sand bath! I have never had one, but mother had told us the importance of keeping a clean and well groomed coat, and the joys have having a sand bath! I started to run over to the corner of the cage to the sand bath , but there were so many things to explore! And so much bedding! There must have been miles of that stuff. 

“Enjoying the detolf, Butterbeany? Don’t worry, you're safe here.” I still am confused, I don’t know where mulch is. I feel guilty all of a sudden, that I have all this and mulch is who-knows where. But I feel safe here, and mulch always said that he does not want to live in a cage, and I always had to remind him that we are hamsters. But mulch is tough, so maybe he is okay. Like I am.

 

Thanks for reading! It may not be the best, but I tried!

 

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Posted 31 August 2020 - 04:20 AM

 

 

Ooooo! What a great chapter! I'm excited to write the next chapter, I've already got a few ideas! :yes:



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Posted 02 September 2020 - 12:28 AM

Chapter 4

 

 

 

Ooooo! What a great chapter! I'm excited to write the next chapter, I've already got a few ideas! :yes:

 

I'm really enjoying reading this and seeing where you guys are taking the story :) Looking forward to the next chapter!! :D



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Posted 05 September 2020 - 10:14 AM

I'm really enjoying reading this and seeing where you guys are taking the story :) Looking forward to the next chapter!! :D

 

Thank you! Just realized it's only been about five days.... oops. Well, it was the same amount that I did Chapter 3 but... it's longer. Way longer. Yikes.

(Chapter 3 was 4 pages and Chapter 5 is like 10 pages) I was going to address a few things, but I actually forgot. Yikes. Here is Chapter 5, guys! I'll edit this when I remember. ;D

 

Chapter 5

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After a hearty dinner of spaghetti (Dad thought it was a good idea to celebrate the occasion, while I just wanted to die under some cozy blankets while listening to sad music with my earbuds), I took some pre-made brownies out of the fridge and smeared them with a bunch of whipped cream. Dad had taken our dirty plates and was starting to rinse off any remaining tomato sauce stuck to the plates.

 

 As he viciously tried to scrub at the red paste on the plate, he started a conversation with me while I scooped up some frosting with my fork. 

 

“So…. How's Butterbean doing? I passed by the Detolf and saw her sleeping, but I wanted to ask nevertheless.” The water swished over the plate as the tomato sauce stain had finally been removed. He pressed the small faucet, dropping out a squirt of liquid soap onto his blue sponge.

 

I scratched the bandage on my thumb. “I think she’s getting settled in, she stopped trying to escape the Detolf and took a nap, which I think is great progress. However…” 

 

I paused, swallowing. “I may have startled her. I didn’t mean to, but when I opened the travel cage, she didn’t budge! So I picked her up.” I sighed. 

 

I knew I was supposed to not grab her, it must be scary to have a giant alien reaching their hands for you, but I panicked! That wasn’t a reasonable explanation though.

I could have been more patient or scooped her out with a hideout or… the possibilities are endless!

 

“What happened next?” He asked. “That doesn’t sound too good.” Wiping the plate with soap, he glanced over to me and lifted his glasses up with his nose.

 

“She bit me. Of course.” I shrugged, like it was no big deal. Which it was. But I knew that Dad would disagree with me, so I quickly added, “It’s no biggie, though! It was really my fault. She was acting in defense, plus my thumb is fine.” I gestured my left hand, which was clenched into a thumbs-up. “It just has a little boo-boo, that’s all.”

 

Looking back at me with disbelief, he turned around and placed the soapy plate into the double sink.

Grabbing another dirty place, he replied with, “If you say so… Speaking of hamsters, I called the pet store before dinner to let them know the news.”

 

I already knew what ‘the news’ was. I bit my lip.

“The manager of the store was very apologetic. He kept saying, ‘how unfortunate,’ actually. They offered a coupon for Butterbean, I think the discount is 15%!”

 

I gobbled up the remaining brownies on my plate; now there were only chocolate crumbs. I felt a bit frustrated, I was trying to forget about ‘the news.’

I had a new hamster, I shouldn’t let it sour my mood. Should it? I sat in silence, thinking. Mostly thoughts about hating myself. 

 

But after letting the silence consume me, I knew that I had to speak up. A moment of too long a wait, I said, “Oh. That’s… that’s nice of them...” I admit, I was lying through my teeth.

 

“That’s what I said! They replied back with, ‘you’re too kind.’” He answered, scrubbing off a dirty meatball stain off a dish. 

 

What type of ‘nice’ pet store supports pet mills? I wondered. 

 

Then again, here I am, supporting a pet store. I told Dad that we should go on Craigslist, but he was way too nervous that I’m gonna get kidnapped or get scammed. I told him that we’ll investigate, but he had none of it and drove to a pet store. And where did that get us?

 

“I, of course, said ‘yes’ because who says no to a deal?” He continued, washing the plate with soap. Bubbles were everywhere. I licked up some crumbs of the brownies on my dish with my finger. “

We’re going to retrieve it tomorrow. Perhaps we could also retrieve something else…?” He grinned, placing a plate into the other sink. He rinsed a glass cup with water. I bit my lip again.

 

I knew the answer already. But if I said it, then it might be true. And I didn’t feel like getting another hamster. They weren’t just toys that you could replace. “What is it?” I asked, feeling dread.

 

Wiping the cup with a soapy sponge, he replied. “I can’t help but feel so sad seeing you down.  So, I was thinking. I know we’ve just gotten Butterbean, but what if we get another hamster?”

He scratched a mosquito bite with his finger, getting watery-soap on over his ear. “We do need a residence for the Linnmon after all.” Dad added. 

 

I felt like yelling at him. I couldn’t just replace them. We literally got Butterbean. She was enough. I didn’t need a second hamster. 

 

Getting another pet wasn’t going to feel any better anyways. It might make me even worse. More pressure to be a better hamster owner.

 

 “Uh…” I took a swig of milk from my cup. I licked the milk moustache that formed on my mouth. “I really don’t know. Isn't it a bit early to get another hamster?”

 

He shrugged. “I’m not forcing you to do anything if you don’t want to,” he said. “I’m just keeping all suggestions open for you. You’ve done lots of research,” he pointed out.

“It’s just so bittersweet that the first time you get a hamster, you lose one. I just want to help you.”

 

 That’s nice of him, but he really didn’t understand. I didn’t want to lose anymore hamsters. I sighed while he placed a foamy cup into the sink and washed the forks.

 

“Sure,” I mumbled. Picking up my plate, I placed the fork and dish into the sink. Before I could open the door to my room, Dad interrupted me. “Hey, wait.” 

 

I turned around and blinked.

 

“You still want the coupon? We could get a cork log or something. If you want.”

 

“Maybe.” I pulled open the door. 

 

“One last thing?” He watched me from the kitchen hallway as he rinsed a soapy plate.

 

“Sure. You positive this is the last thing? I have to do homework.” I gestured to the door. Plus watch to see how Butterbean is doing, I silently thought to myself. 

 

“Positive,” he gave me a thumbs-up. “Uhm… next week, your mother and sister will be visiting. They’ll be having dinner with us.” My heart froze. I stared at the floor. I bit my lip. Hard. I felt blood on my dry lips.

 

“My stepsister. Not my sister.” I corrected him. It still felt wrong to call her my stepsister. I wanted nothing to do with her. I didn’t even want a relationship status with her.

 

Gabrielle Greens. Her name wanted me to throw up. Disgusting.

 

“Fine, stepsister. Be nice to them, please,” Dad urged me. 

 

Why should I be nice to THEM? If they don’t treat me with respect, then I won't treat them with respect! 

 

The thoughts went through my head, each one making me want to slam my head with a pillow. I swallowed the rock in my throat.

 

 As you can see, I don’t like my stepsister. Or my mother either. Who leaves their own child like that just because their financial funds are going down? 

 

A gold digger. A dirty little gold digger and a spoiled brat were coming to my house to eat our food. I didn’t respond. He sighed. I didn’t get how he didn’t feel the same way as me. 

 

Did he still love her? I wondered. I know love makes you do silly things, but this?! This was downright outrageous. Out of everyone here, I expected my Dad to feel the same hatred I did. They ruined our lives.

 

“April,” he raised his voice. “I know that you don’t like them, but it doesn’t hurt to be kind.” He turned the faucet to the other side and rinsed the soapy plates, watching the soap dissolve. 

 

I cringed. “I don’t not like them. I despise them with all my heart,” I insisted.

 

“...Hate is a strong word.” Dad slowly said.

 

“But it’s the right word!” I scoffed in disbelief. “Why don’t you feel the same way I do? It’s so easy to despise a mother who left their baby girl so that she could swoon over a rich old guy!”

 

“Is THAT what this is all about?!” He sighed. “Enough. You don’t get it. Go to your room and do your homework.” He shook his head. “But I expect you to be nice to your mother and sister on Saturday. Is that clear, miss?” 

 

His voice was dangerously low. I didn’t want to risk getting grounded (there was another a high chance) so I nodded, not looking at him. I opened the door, which let out a little creak.

 

“Goodnight,” he placed a clean dish onto the dish rack. It fell slightly to the right. 

 

“I just don’t get why you’re so misbehaved today. Why?”

 

I didn’t respond to his question. What would I have said? I felt miserable. I felt like taking out that on people.

 

Like my father, I guess.

 

“Goodnight. Sweet dreams.” I closed the door slowly, making sure not to slam it on him. To not shut it too loud. Even though I wanted to do it so bad. It was the least I could do, after all.

 

I sat behind my bedroom door in the darkness. I didn’t bother to turn on the light switch. I closed my eyes, listening to the flow of the water in the kitchen.

It was a bit muffled, but our walls weren’t very thick. I heard the TV turn on and assumed that my father was watching the daily news. As he always did.

 

Why am I like this? I thought to myself.

 

————————————————————————————————————————

 

I yawned while I padded through autumn leaves, twigs, sticks, and rocks. The forest that once was welcoming to me was now dark and eerie.

 

Danger lurked at every corner and any unexpected sound scared me.

 

Even the sound of my own paws pattering frightened me. 

 

What? Who knows, maybe that noise could be the sound of a predator’s paws! Like a rat or a fox that’s hungry for my blood! Come on, I bet you’re looking at me with disbelief, but honestly! 

 

God, I wish people respected me more. I may be a hamster, but I’ve lived for eleven months. Meanwhile, some hamsters don’t have the chance to.

I’m looking at those rascal humans who think we don’t have feelings and that it’s right to treat us like dirt.

The only thing that should be treated like dirt is dirt, not living breathing ANIMALS!

 

Caw-caw! I immediately sprinted at the sound, running in circles; rushing to anywhere that the bird couldn’t get me through. Except the bird calls started to get quieter and quieter. I looked up to see a bird way up in the night sky, flying away. Didn’t even bat an eye at me. I walked away, embarrassed. 

 

A guy like me definitely wasn’t suitable for the wild. I’ve never even been outside of my pet store enclosure and look where I am. I relied on the pet store employees to feed me and give me water. The only danger I came across was little kids tapping on my tank and waking me up. Or the employees grabbing us so hard that it felt like we’d fall apart. 

 

My whiskers twitched when I felt raindrops on top of me. Rain?! I groaned. My fur was going to become all greasy. And what would happen if the forest flooded or something? I needed to find shelter. Maybe a tree? A bush?

 

 I scurried away, the thought of becoming all wet making my paws go faster and faster. Of course, I had to slow down and stop eventually to catch my breath. Expecting to feel wet droppings of water on top of my head, I felt nothing. I looked up to find that I had now taken cover over a hanging willow branch of a tree. 

 

Relieved that I was now away from any more rain, I searched for a place to dig. What for? Just a small burrow. My eyes were drooping and I had been wide alert all afternoon. I probably should have taken a nap in the car or something, but how could I be asleep driving to the unknown?

 

After digging lots of dirt up, I fell down exhausted. I had only done two chambers, but I started my own burrow after a long day of no rest. My paws heavy with mud and my whiskers packed with soil, I collapsed into one of the chambers, feeling rest inviting me. I followed it, my eyes slowly closing, until eventually, only darkness surrounded me.

As I slept, I heard footsteps from the dirt above me. In fact, while I was snoring, it shook hard enough so that it got dirt in my mouth. Gross. I stood up so fast I hit my head on the tunnels. Ouch. I should have made it taller. Now I have dirt in my mouth and pain in my head. Spitting it out, I heard something. It’s probably just the wind, right?

 

...Right? I heard it again. Was it? No, it couldn’t be. But what if I was right? What if they were voices?

I slowly climbed up the tunnel, trying to be as silent as possible. Finally, the muffled sounds were beginning to become louder and clearer. 

 

“Aw, man!” One groaned. “I can’t believe they’re asking me to be in the evening patrol! I wish the sun would go down later,” they whined.

 

“You’re not a pup anymore,” another commented. “If you want to become a guardian of our clan, then you have to wake up early.”

 

“Don’t be so harsh to them, Night.” I inched closer to the top. I was able to get a better view. She turned to the small dwarf.

 

“You’ll be getting used to it as you wake up every morning, Twig. It’ll become routine to you!” 

 

There were four of them. They were… hamsters? They looked wild from what I know of it. Two of them were pure black dwarves that looked full-grown.

The other two looked like kids. One was white while the other was brown, kinda like my fur.

 

“Don’t worry about Twig, Evergreen!” The white one cheerfully said. “She’s just being a baby. 

“Oh, so I’m the baby here?” Twig challenged. “At least when I was a pup, I didn’t constantly cry all the time! Wa-wa, Yuki, do you need me to kiss a boo-boo on your head?” Yuki hissed.

 

The adult dwarf rolled his eyes. “Stop that, Yuki and Twig. Things are different from the nursery out here. You have to be on your best behavior and--” 

 

The two of them burst and started wrestling with each other. I noticed that it was play-fighting instead of actual fighting.

 

Good thing, because I really didn’t want any bloodshed on the front of my burrow.

 

It was the first one I’ve ever done, since those bozos didn’t give us any bedding!

 

Suddenly, they took a turn. The wrong turn and fell into a tunnel. My tunnel. Rolling right towards me. Uh oh.

 

After getting run over by a bunch of misbehaving pups, I, completely dizzy, stood up slowly as possible. “Intruder! Trespasser!” One of them squeaked.

 

 It sounded like they were trying to hiss, but they weren’t doing a good job of it. And their face was sort of scrunched up, like they were trying to intimidate me but just ended up like they had a really bad stomach ache.

 

The two adults came rushing into the tunnel.

 “Twig, Yuki! What happened?! I heard you calling and I came running in--” Evergreen started to say, then sniffed the air and looked right at me with huge eyes. “Flint! I think we have a problem.”

 

“What is it? Misbehaving pups that are getting in trouble right after this-” He grumbled, then halted. His black, beady eyes stared at me.

“Intruder!” He growled. “It must be one of those Campbell’s dwarves spying on us!”

 

“Don’t be silly!” She shook her head. “It’s obviously not a part of their clan. Or our clan either.” She plugged her nose with her paws.

 

“Obviously. This guy stinks! Even worse than those dim-wits,” Flint commented.
 

Way to be nice, I thought, feeling my cheeks getting red. How embarrassing.

 

“We should kick him out of our territory!” 

“But in training,” Yuki protested, “we have to ask why they’re here.”

 

Twig groaned. “But it’s not a Clan cat!”

 

“So? Sunlight, my mentor, said that it doesn’t matter whether or not it’s a Clan cat! It might be a rogue group asking for help.”

He sniffled. “Why does a rogue need our help? They’re asking for it for not being in our clan!”

 

“Quiet!” Evergreen commanded them. They both became silent. Finally!

 

She studied me with her glowing red eyes. I couldn’t help but feel frustrated. I just wanted to get out of here, not become victim to an integration! “Why are you here?” She calmly asked me.

 

I paused. Should I trust them? I glanced back to the group who all called me a trespasser? Who said that this was their territory? I thought to myself, rubbing my nose.

“I’m just trying to sleep. I’ll move out of your territory tomorrow,” I muttered. 

 

“Oh? So you’ll take over our camp in the morning?” He challenged me. I glared back.

 

“Of course not!” How dumb were these hamsters, I wondered, if they won’t even trust a half-dead hamster from a pet store! They must have some serious trust issues.

 

“I’m a lost hamster, okay?!” I lashed out at them. “I lived my whole life in a pet store and now I was finally going to have a caring pet owner who was going to take care of me and Dots!” 

 

“Pet store?” He stood, thinking for a moment, then his eyes lit up and turned to Evergreen. 

“He must be one of those hamsters with humans!”

 

“Horrible humans,” I added.

 

“We’ve got a few of them roaming our forest,” she comforted me. “I understand what you mean.”

 

“If they’re so horrible, then why’d you call your human, ‘a caring pet owner?’” He wondered out loud.

 

“The humans at the pet store treated us like dirt,” I confessed. I looked up. “But the human that went to pick us up was going to give us huge enclosures!”

 

 The adults followed my every word while the two other pups whispered to one another.

I couldn’t blame them, but could they at least make it less obvious they were gossiping about me?

 

I continued, ignoring them. “She knew what species I was and had a bunch of information. She didn’t just believe the employees there and dump us into a Crittertrail to live there for the rest of our lives.”

 

“What’s a Crittertrail?” Twig blurted out. Apparently he was also listening to me. Evergreen shushed him.

 

“Don’t mind the younglings,” she said, “you can continue. Although… could I ask a question?”

 

“Sure,” I answered. I looked back at Twig. “Crittertrails are small cages that the humans created. They’re made from plastic and metal, plus have tons of tunnels and are very colorful.”
 

He tilted his head. “Oh. How small is it? Like….” he thought of a moment. “As small as a willow tree?” I remembered passing a willow tree while passing the forest. Even a tree was bigger than a Crittertrail.

 

“It’s nearly the same length and width, actually,” I said. His eyes went huge. I shifted to Evergreen, hitting the walls of the tunnel. Turning to her, I mentioned, “Didn’t you want to ask something?”

 

“Yeah, I actually did,” she paused. “You said ‘us’ when you were talking about your owner. Do you have another hamster with you?” I froze when she said that.

 

“Yes,” I croaked out. “Me and her were in the human’s hands, but we slipped. I went up and she went down. I fell out the window and her carrier fell onto the car ground.” 

 

I wonder what Dots was doing right now. Was she thinking of me? Was she happy? I felt myself feeling jealous yet guilty at the same time. What if she was dead right now? Maybe she was safe in the human’s house, burrowing as far as she could possibly burrow. Yeah.

 

Flint yawned. “We’re wasting time. We could be bringing back food to the camp, but no, we’re wasting time here chatting about your life story.” Evergreen looked back, horrified. 

 

Did she not know her friend was one of the most rudest hamsters I’ve ever met? I’m a respectful hamster AND nearly a senior. I can’t believe it! 

 

He studied me. “Why don’t you come with us? Knowing you’re a human hamster, you won’t last a day here,” he muttered. 

 

How kind of him, I grumbled to myself. 

“Sure. Besides, I might be more helpful than you realize!” I added, rolling my eyes. 

 

He scoffed, crawling out of the tunnel. Evergreen did the same.

The hamster kids moved out of his way by climbing out of the tunnel.

 “Well, if you say so. We’ll see,” he snorted.

 

I rolled my eyes, following him. “So you’re inviting me to your camp?” I asked.

“Obviously. Where else would we go?” He snarkily answered. I resisted from rolling my eyes again. “You can ask Aspenstar if you want to join.”

 

“Who’s Aspenstar?”

“Our leader. She, of course, leads the Clan.” 

“So you want me to be in your Clan?” I watched him with confused eyes.

 

 He acts like he despises me! Actually, he DOES despise me! I don’t even know how to act or burrow! Well okay, I did make this tunnel… but still!

 

He laughed. Was that an actual genuine laugh…? I didn’t even tell him a joke!

 

“You want yourself in a clan! A Clan takes care of all the oldest and youngest hamsters, who can’t hunt for themselves! Of course, you’re not a senior or anything. Even then, the seniors used to be warriors who helped hunt for us.”

 

He chuckled to himself. Was I really that funny? We reached the opening of the tunnel and were welcomed by shivering weather and tons of trees. “I guess you could be a mediator or healer? You can’t really be a queen…” He stifled his giggles. Good.

 

“Haha, a male queen!” Yuki giggled to the brown hamster. Of course… 

“I’m not going to be a queen or a healer or whatever is a mediator,” I muttered. “I’m going to go back to my human.”

 

Evergreen sighed. “Not yet you will,” she responded. “Before you can do that, we’re taking you back to our camp. We’re sorry, but who knows how far she is? It’s better if you just stay here for now.”

 

I insisted, “No, Evergreen! You’ve all been a great help…” Wasting my time… I thought, “but I think I better get going, okay?”

 

Flint groaned. “Really…? Come on, at least let us show you the camp? Then you can decide.”
 

How nice. “I’m fine, I’ll just stay here.”
“Please?” Evergreen urged me.

 

He snorted.

“First? You’re not safe here, obviously. You don’t even know how to defend yourself!” 

I swallowed. I knew how to fight from instincts! But have I ever been in a fight? Luckily no, but still!

 

“Second?” He resumed. 

“You don’t know how to hunt either. I might not like you,” that was definitely an understatement, “but I’m not going to let you starve or die by getting eaten by a wolf or something.”

 

“I’m not going to get eaten by a wolf or starve,” I sighed. “You don’t even know me! You don’t even know my NAME!”

“Listen, I know how… determined you are… to find whoever this ‘caring hamster owner’ is...” Flint was clearly getting irritated with me. I guess I can’t blame him.

 

“But at least check in with us! It wouldn’t hurt. We’ll teach you how to defend yourself, hunt, and… make better burrows. No offense.”

 

About to protest that I was tired and wasn’t able to show how capable I was at burrowing, I nodded. “I guess I really can’t argue with you anymore. Lead the way then.”

 

Evergreen grinned as we started to trot to their tunnels. “You’re officially a member of the Winter White Clan!”

 

I sprinted to catch up with them. Clearly they have more stamina than I do. “I really don’t know if I’ll be staying for long,” I confessed. “Besides, I haven’t even talked to your leader yet. Aspenstar could either hate me or like me. It’s her choice.” I added. 

 

“Come on! Maybe I could try convincing her? Or at least make it so you can stay for a little bit!” She padded over to me, in the back, while Twig, Yuki, and Flint were at the top. 

 

I hesitated for a moment. “That’s nice of you, but no thanks. I really don’t see how I would make it up to you if I got up. It would be hard to explain how this hamster I met a few minutes ago should be in our Clan for a short-while.” I pointed out.

 

She laughed. “True. We’re almost there… what’s your name?”

 

“Mulch.” I answered.

 

She reminded me a little of Dots. She was so cheerful at times. I’d always tell her that there was barely anyone that looked at the rodents section in this town, but she kept on believing. 

 

Believing that one day, we would finally get a good owner and a good home.

 

I hope she isn't lost like me. I do hope that she is with the girl. 

 

“What a weird name,” she commented, “but I’m not one to judge. Are you excited?”
 

I don’t answer. Not yet. I don’t tell her that I’m excited and nervous at the same time.

Are wild hamsters nice? If they’re like Flint, then probably not. But if Evergreen is in their clan, then there’s a possibility that some of them are nice. I hope so.

 

Will I ever find the girl? I vividly remember her image. She was blurry but she had brown hair and what seemed to be blue eyes. 

Whatever will happen, I’m here for it. I’ll just have to go into the unknown.

 

read this when you finish the chapter!

 

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Thanks for reading! The next chapter, Chapter 6, will be done by lil BIG dwarf. Bye!


Edited by lilhams~uwu, 08 October 2020 - 06:45 AM.

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